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W.A.L.T : Read to infer and write to imply
Add 4 extended sentences to your chosen word
1969 February 17th, Egypt
I hesitated, the pressure was extreme, My heart was pounding as I steadily stretched
my fingers towards The prized artifact. Cautiously wrapping my fingers around it I froze,
counting my breaths as I lifted It carefully off the pedestal. I turned around and slipped the artifact
into my backpack “ I'm ok?” I said in a sarcastic low toned voice. I shrugged and headed for the
door until I noticed something oddly strange, The door slammed shut. I carelessly threw my bag
on the floor and banged until my knuckles went red. I slopped onto the floor and my face turned
red when I realised, I was trapped.
my fingers towards The prized artifact. Cautiously wrapping my fingers around it I froze,
counting my breaths as I lifted It carefully off the pedestal. I turned around and slipped the artifact
into my backpack “ I'm ok?” I said in a sarcastic low toned voice. I shrugged and headed for the
door until I noticed something oddly strange, The door slammed shut. I carelessly threw my bag
on the floor and banged until my knuckles went red. I slopped onto the floor and my face turned
red when I realised, I was trapped.
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Hi Jaimie,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing. I really liked the way you used lots of descriptive words in your writing. Next time maybe you could a little bit more information.